Thursday, July 20, 2017

July 20, 2017

Poets’ Roundtable



Welcome



News and Jabber

From a New Yorker article about the poet Larry Fagin.


“Fagin transmitted lessons he’d learned from Jack Spicer, Ginsberg, and others, mixed with his own: use ego as a “cutting tool”; create simple ideas in complex relationships; use ellipses; beware of airplane poems and writing about dreams; beauty gets in the way; keep the reader off balance; kill modifiers and metaphors (unless they’re really good); strive for “strangeness.” He told us to write every day, but only a little bit; to “be more in the world”; to look up when we walk down the street; to avoid distraction; to never talk about real estate. Most professors I’d had until then left class the moment the bell rang, offered perfunctory critiques of my work, were unfamiliar with their own reading assignments, and generally regarded the act of teaching as an annoyance. To Fagin, students were his life.”




Dana Gioia is an accomplished contemporary poet now residing in California, currently that state’s Poet Laureate.  This quote is from an  interview found at the above link:


His book Can Poetry Matter? Was published some time ago and was quite special then and remains a worthy read.
And here is a link to an article written by him for “The Atlantic Monthly”.


I point these out for their information, their importance to us as poets and as a way of looking at what has and hasn’t changed since he wrote the book.


And here is a link to his bio: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dana_Gioia.


I cite all this stuff because I like him and his trajectory into and out of business and into poetry and music. But I especially like him because his poetry is so extraordinarily well-crafted.


“Q: How has the conversation shifted in the years since “Can Poetry Matter?” was published?


A: Most of the trends that I talked about 25 years ago are still present. Poetry is even more isolated in the university. It’s even more absent in the mass media. Poetry criticism is even more remote from the needs of ordinary readers. The one significant change has been that outside the university and the mass media, there’s been an enormous amount of local organizing to create poetry events, presses, instruction and a kind of participatory culture.


It comes down to something really simple. People don’t necessarily like to read poetry, but most people love to hear a good poem well-recited. So the major trend that’s happened is that the energy of poetry now happens when it’s taken off the page and spoken. This trend originated and continues almost entirely outside English departments. So it’s a kind of populist energy in poetry versus an elitist trend. The whole culture is moving from the book to the screen or the speaker.”


Here is the title poem  from Pity the Beautiful:


Pity the Beautiful


Pity the beautiful,
the dolls, and the dishes,
the babes with big daddies
granting their wishes.


Pity the pretty boys,
the hunks, and Apollos,
the golden lads whom
success always follows.


The hotties, the knock-outs,
the tens out of ten,
the drop-dead gorgeous,
the great leading men.


Pity the faded,
the bloated, the blowsy,
the paunchy Adonis
whose luck’s gone lousy.


Pity the gods,
no longer divine.
Pity the night
the stars lose their shine.


Money
Money is a kind of poetry.– Wallace Stevens


Money, the long green,
cash, stash, rhino, jack
or just plain dough.


Chock it up, fork it over,
shell it out. Watch it
burn holes through pockets.


To be made of it! To have it
to burn! Greenbacks, double eagles,
megabucks and Ginnie Maes.


It greases the palm, feathers a nest,
holds heads above water,
makes both ends meet.


Money breeds money.
Gathering interest, compounding daily.
Always in circulation.


Money. You don’t know where it’s been,
but you put it where your mouth is.
And it talks.


The Current Assignment

I had some difficulty with this assignment and I don’t know why. I’ve been writing a lot and finished several poems and asked where I could put the designated line (“Tell me again how…”) and consistently came up empty. I tried to write to the line. Nix on that. How did the rest of you do?

The Next Assignment

Write a poem about or to an old love(r).

The Next Meeting

The next meeting will be on August 10, 2017 from 1-2:30PM.


Other Jabber

I was about to decide I had included enough stuff I like to talk about but then tripped upon this poem by 2016 Pulitzer Prize winner Tyehimba Jess.


Blind Boone's Vision


BY TYEHIMBA JESS


When I got old enough
I asked my mother,
to her surprise,
to tell me what she did
with my eyes. She balked
and stalled, sounding
unsure for the first time
I could remember.
It was the tender way
she held my face
and kissed where tears
should have rolled
that told me I’d asked
of her the almost impossible—
to recount my blinding
tale, to tell what became
of the rest of me.
She took me by the hand
and led me to a small
sapling that stood not
much taller than me.
I could smell the green
marrow of its promise
reaching free of the soil
like a song from Earth’s
royal, dirty mouth.
Then Mother told me
how she, newly freed,
had prayed like a slave
through the night when
the surgeon took my eyes
to save my fevered life,
then got off her knees
come morning to take
the severed parts of me
for burial—right there
beneath that small tree.
They fed the roots,
climbed through its leaves
to soak in sunlight . . .
and so, she told me,
I can see.
When the wind rustles
up and cools me down,
when the earth shakes
with footsteps and when
the sound of birdcalls
stirs forests like the black
and white bustling
’neath my fingertips
I am of the light and shade
of my tree. Now,
ask me how tall
that tree of mine
has grown to be
after all this time—
it touches a place
between heaven and here.
And I shudder when I hear
the earth’s wind
in my bones
through the bones
of that boxed-up
swarm of wood,
bird and bee:
I let it loose . . .
and beyond
me.




Friday, July 7, 2017

July 6, 2017

Poets’ Roundtable


Welcome


News and Jabber







Interestingly, I came across this poem oblivious to the assignment. It makes me wonder if subconsciously, after working with fire consciously for ten days, I was subliminally predisposed to finding this. This is an operation that I think occurs in poems as we write and read them. The layers of meanings (polysemy) seem to coax us in the direction the poet indicates.



Nigerian Poet Ben Okri Pens A Powerful Eulogy to the Grenfell Tower Victims

06.27.17
by JACQUELINE TRAORÉ



LONDON— Nigerian award-winning poet and novelist Ben Okri, penned a heartfelt poem in memory of the victims of the Grenfell Tower Fire.


The poem vividly captures the grief and anger of the survivors and denounces the underlying causes of what is arguably the biggest preventable tragedy of this year. Okri writes:

Residents of the area call it the crematorium.
It has revealed the undercurrents of our age.
The poor who thought voting for the rich would save them.
The poor who believed all that the papers said.
The poor who listened with their fears.
The poor who live in their rooms and dream for their kids.
The poor are you and I, you in your garden of flowers,
In your house of books, who gaze from afar
At a destiny that draws near with another name.
Sometimes it takes an image to wake up a nation
From its secret shame. And here it is every name
Of someone burnt to death, on the stairs or in their room,
Who had no idea what they died for, or how they were betrayed.
They did not die when they died; their deaths happened long
Before. It happened in the minds of people who never saw
Them. It happened in the profit margins. It happened
In the laws. They died because money could be saved and made.


Watch his impassioned performance below:

Grenfell video

For summer reading as suggested by the Washington Post.

While these are all great reading, I suggest looking at Charles Simic, one of the few poets I can listen to for longer than fifteen minutes. He is a contemporary and we should be glad of that.

https://www.washingtonpost.com/entertainment/books/a-definitive-work-on-marianne-moore-and-other-best-poetry-to-read-this-month/2017/06/27/8bb51200-569f-11e7-ba90-f5875b7d1876_story.html?utm_term=.f441abb4c846

Books
A definitive work on Marianne Moore and other best poetry to read this month
By Elizabeth Lund June 27
  “New Collected Poems,” by Marianne Moore (FSG)
New Collected Poems of Marianne Moore (FSG), edited by Heather Cass White, gives readers a fresh perspective on the legacy of Marianne Moore, considered one of America’s most influential modernist poets. Moore, whose awards included a Pulitzer Prize, was hailed for her precise language, penetrating descriptions and keen observations. She was also known for incessantly revising her poems, much to the dismay of editors who tried to create definitive editions of her selected and collected poems. In this new volume, White, a professor at the University of Alabama, presents what she believes to be the best version of Moore’s work, along with copious notes, and various versions of poems that Moore tinkered with over years or even decades. Readers and writers will benefit from seeing how Moore, who died in 1972 at age 84, drastically cut some of her most famous poems, including “The Steeple-Jack” and “The Frigate Pelican” and “An Octopus.” With this book, White has not only given readers an authoritative compendium of Moore’s work but an insightful critique of her writing process. “I think Moore, in later decades of her life, did her readers a lasting, and compounding, disservice by altering and suppressing the writing she published as a younger poet,” White comments.

[Best poetry collections — to inspire, challenge and spark the imagination]

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  “Scribbled in the Dark,” by Charles Simic (ECCO)
Charles Simic, a Pulitzer winner and former U.S. poet laureate, has always challenged and delighted his audience with writing that is beautiful and surreal and forces people to consider the validity of their own perceptions. In Scribbled in the Dark (Ecco), Simic presents short, tightly crafted vignettes filled with a variety of people in oddly mundane settings. Among them are a judge asleep in the courtroom, a person lost in the snow and a young boy watching a stray white cat peer into people’s windows. As with Simic’s previous collection, “The Lunatic,” the poems here convey both a sense of whimsy and a sinister undercurrent, as if to suggest that no moment is completely joy-filled. A cherry pie cooling by a window, for example, is soon marred by the devil, who sticks his finger in it. That duality runs throughout the poems, as the speaker recalls childhood memories, considers world news, the occupation of his native Yugoslavia and becomes increasingly aware of his own and others’ mortality: In the poem “Many a Holy Man,” the speaker describes a man struggling to “make peace with everything/ that can’t be changed,/ understood or ever properly resolved —” and, later on, to “devote his remaining days/ to minding that inner light/ So that it may let him walk without stumbling/ as little by little night overtakes him.”

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  “Tough Luck,” by Todd Boss (NORTON)
Tough Luck (Norton) is the much-anticipated third book by Todd Boss, who is widely regarded as one of the best poets of his generation. His first two collections — “Yellowrocket” and “Pitch” — established his reputation for using brilliant wordplay and portraying the people and landscape of his childhood in Wisconsin with clarity and hard-edged grace. Here, readers will find some familiar themes, as in the first section, which highlights some of the life lessons Boss learned from his parents, hard-working cattle farmers. In “When My Father Says Toughen Up,” Boss explains that “He doesn’t/ say it to berate you, he says it to/ hike you up an inch or two, like/ when he took you by the collar/ when you were little to zip you/ into that boiled wool jacket he/ sent you out to chores with.” Those memories couldn’t prepare the poet for a painful divorce or for his reaction after the collapse of the Interstate 35W bridge in Minneapolis, minutes after he crossed it. Those experiences contribute to the sense of loss and foreboding that permeates the writing. What readers will most appreciate, however, is the speaker’s unflagging determination to endure and to keep moving forward. In “A Hoard of Driftwood,” for instance, he describes the wood as “All dry-weight, drier than stone but thin as air, finer than/ hair and softer than skin — as if despite the unintended sin/ of being broken down, they’d been born again, beauty-strong.”

Elizabeth Lund writes about poetry every month for The Washington Post.

Evening Walk - Poem by Charles Simic

You give the appearance of listening
To my thoughts, O trees,
Bent over the road I am walking
On a late-summer evening
When every one of you is a steep staircase
The night is slowly descending.

The high leaves like my mother's lips
Forever trembling, unable to decide,
For there's a bit of wind,
And it's like hearing voices,
Or a mouth full of muffled laughter,
A huge dark mouth we can all fit in
Suddenly covered by a hand.

Everything quiet. Light
Of some other evening strolling ahead,
Long-ago evening of silk dresses,
Bare feet, hair unpinned and falling.
Happy heart, what heavy steps you take
As you follow after them in the shadows.

The sky at the road's end cloudless and blue.
The night birds like children
Who won't come to dinner.
Lost children in the darkening woods.

Charles Simic




Comments

Definition of imbricate

  1. :  lying lapped over each other in regular order imbricate scales
  2. I like the thought of using this regarding words, meanings in poetry
  3. noun
    1.
    a condition in which a single word, phrase, or concept has more than one meaning or connotation.
Polysemy (/pəˈlɪsᵻmi/ or /ˈpɒlᵻsiːmi/; from Greek: πολυ-, poly-, "many" and σῆμα, sêma, "sign") is the capacity for a sign (such as a word, phrase, or symbol) to have multiple meanings (that is, multiple semes or sememes and thus multiple senses), usually related by contiguity of meaning within a semantic field.



The Current Assignment

Have someone else read the poem first.
I lost control of this assignment and ended up writing ten poems about fire in ten days. It was fun, actually. I also, as indicated above, made the assignment based upon a list of writing prompts I was reading, not (at least consciously) in light of the Grenfell Towers tragedy although I will be the first to say that I rely on the hidden vectors that guide my writing. At any rate, I came up with a variety of takes, some good, some bad, but all interesting.


The Next Assignment

"Tell me again how ..." Write a poem using this phrase anywhere in the poem

The Next Meeting

Other Jabber

Regarding the slaughter of pigs, I found first the review (second link below) and then the documentary itself, first link below.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EctUYzvUYvI It's quite fascinating if you stick to it.

And check out this link to an article I found very interesting:

It's about killing pigs but don't let that put you off. You see, it's a film review about a movie about killing pigs. It's well-written and may make you want to see the movie. An excerpt:

"But Trump doesn’t come into it. George Orwell does, with Ralph Steadman’s illustrations. Plus Lord of the Flies (“Kill the pig! Cut its throat!”), Margaret Atwood and Christopher Hitchens. Angus Macqueen’s thoughtful, beautiful, poetic, genuinely original film trots about in time and place. Through literature and art, as well as history and science."

Grammarly Check out this spell checker and editor. I like it a lot although it removes a lot of formatting. It checks for grammar and typograpical issues too.