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December 19, 2019


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News and Jabber


Here's a link to Dylan Thomas reading "A Child's Christmas in Wales." 

enjoy it!  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hv4-sgFw3Go. And here's a link to the text:

http://www.classicshorts.com/stories/xmas.html


While looking for something to chat about today, I decided to see what August Kleinzahler was up to. I've been a fan of his for years despite rarely reading whatever is available online, came across him quite by accident some thirty years ago. His language is always enchanting, full of good stuff. A quotation from wikipedia:

Kleinzahler is the author of ten books of poetry, including The Strange Hours Travelers Keep and Sleeping It Off in Rapid City. He has also published a non-fiction work, Cutty, One Rock (Low Characters and Strange Places, Gently Explained). Allen Ginsberg commented: "August Kleinzahler's verse line is always precise, concrete, intelligent and rare - that quality of 'chiseled' verse memorable in Basil Bunting's and Ezra Pound's work. A loner, a genius."[1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/August_Kleinzahler


And so, I come to this poem, one of those I wish I were good enough to write myself:



Watching Dogwood Blossoms Fall In A Parking Lot Off Route 46


Dogwood blossoms drift down at evening

            as semis pound past Phoenix Seafood

and the Savarin plant, west to the Turnpike,

            Paterson or hills beyond.

The adulterated, pearly light and bleak perfume

            of benzene and exhaust

make this solitary tree and the last of its bloom

             as stirring somehow after another day

at the hospital with Mother and the ashen old ladies

             lost to TV reruns flickering overhead

as that shower of peach blossoms Tu Fu watched

              fall on the riverbank

from the shadows of the Jade Pavilion,

              while ghosts and the music

of yellow orioles found out the seam of him

              and slowly cut along it. 

by August Kleinzahler, from Sleeping It Off in Rapid City, 2008


Who knows about Basil Bunting? He's more than worth a look.



Today's Assignment


I said in my last email that I had written several poems, none of them useful as the assignment. I made another effort that wasn't quite as bad as the others. Anyone else have a comment about it?


Next Assignment

The next assignment is to write a poem about something you would never, never, ever do. Or, about something you would never, never, ever do again. Or both.

Next Meeting


The next meeting is on Thursday, January 2, 2020.





Monday, December 16, 2019

December 5, 2019


Welcome

I have no information regarding absentees today

News and Jabber

I incude this entire article about Clive James because you may not be able to access it in The Guardian online:


Telegraph  Culture  Books  Authors

Clive James’s true gift to us was his magnificent poetry

JAKE KERRIDGE

Follow 1 DECEMBER 2019 • 8:00AM

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The critic Clive James, who has died at the age of 80, pictured in 2011

The critic Clive James, who has died at the age of 80, pictured in 2011 CREDIT: ANDREW CROWLEY FOR DT ARTS

For most of his dazzling career, Clive James’s besotted audience thought of him as, in The New Yorker’s phrase, “a brilliant bunch of guys”: chat show host, documentary maker, television critic, literary essayist, novelist and author of hilarious, not entirely truthful volumes of autobiography. Only in his last decade (he died last Sunday having been diagnosed with leukaemia in 2010) could we come to focus on him in one role, the one that came to mean the most to him: poet.


In 2014 he wrote a poem, “Japanese Maple”, in which he vowed to live long enough to see the new maple tree in his garden “turn to flame” in the autumn. Happily, he defied his doctors’ prognosis for several years; so long, indeed, that to his embarrassment the tree predeceased him.


But “Japanese Maple” went viral, cementing his late reputation as a brilliant poet of mortality. Even those of us who loved him in his earlier incarnations could apply Shakespeare’s words to him: “Nothing in his life became him like the leaving it.”


My first encounter with James’s poetry was reading his collection Other Passports as a teenager: not the sort of poetry book that impresses girls, but I plucked it off the school library shelf because I thought he was brilliant on the telly and I needed a laugh. It has its serious moments but it mostly comprises parodies, squibs, lampoons and witty Auden-esque verse letters; most of the lines that have stayed with me are too rude to quote in a family newspaper. Back then, his most famous poem was that gleeful expression of writerly schadenfreude, The Book of My Enemy Has Been Remaindered. (“His delicate, quivering sensibility is now as one/ With Barbara Windsor’s Book of Boobs.”)


When he published his collected poems in 2003, the volume was entitled The Book of My Enemy: not just in reference to his biggest poetic hit, but also because, as he put it, “The urge to write in verse has always been my financial enemy, and I have always done my best to resist it… I had a family to feed, and prose paid.” But having made his pile and retired from television at the turn of the millennium, he started to spend more time on verse, and to go deeper.



Like his poetic masters Auden and Larkin, James’s favoured method was to deploy a vigorously demotic vocabulary in a strict, old-fashioned verse form. (You could say of him what he said of Larkin: that he had “a romantic sensibility classically disciplined”.) Although his poems were formally structured, his aim was to make them sound like somebody talking – like Clive James talking. He developed a distinctive, accessible voice, the verse equivalent of the robust no-nonsense Aussie voice of his journalism.


This was honed on blokeish poems such as “Bring Me the Sweat of Gabriela Sabatini”, but was flexible enough to work well when he began to embark on such pieces of poetic self-examination as “Son of a Soldier”, in which he wrote about the damaging effect of his father’s death when he was a child, lamenting: “First for the hurt I had done to those I loved,/ Then for myself, for what had been done to me/ In the beginning, to make my heart so cold.”


In his last illness-plagued decade he published a book-length poem called The River in the Sky, four new collections of poetry and a 500-page verse translation of Dante’s Divine Comedy (as well as several non-poetic books). His earlier, pyrotechnic satires already need to be peppered with footnotes to explain the references, but a late poem like “Sentenced to Life”, in which he thinks about his native Australia and the fact he is too sick ever to return there (“The sky is overcast/ Here in the English autumn, but my mind/ Basks in the light I never left behind”) will chime with anybody too far from home.


The obituaries focused on his work in television and journalism, but that will fade from the collective memory. It is in these universal late poems that he will live on.


Japanese Maple

Your death, near now, is of an easy sort.
So slow a fading out brings no real pain.
Breath growing short
Is just uncomfortable. You feel the drain
Of energy, but thought and sight remain:

Enhanced, in fact. When did you ever see
So much sweet beauty as when fine rain falls
On that small tree
And saturates your brick back garden walls,
So many Amber Rooms and mirror halls?

Ever more lavish as the dusk descends
This glistening illuminates the air.
It never ends.
Whenever the rain comes it will be there,
Beyond my time, but now I take my share.

My daughter’s choice, the maple tree is new.
Come autumn and its leaves will turn to flame.
What I must do
Is live to see that.That will end the game
For me, though life continues all the same:

Filling the double doors to bathe my eyes,
A final flood of colors will live on
As my mind dies,
Burned by my vision of a world that shone
So brightly at the last, and then was gone.

© Clive James, 2014

“ The poet is a lifer. Anyone who gets into the game will soon start wishing that there was a version of it with lower stakes, but there isn't. - Clive James ”


The current assignment

Who did it? Any difficulties, comments, etc.


Dru's poem:



Dru Martin


Wed, Dec 4, 9:43 PM (10 hours ago)




to LisaMARLOUMaryRichRochelleSalmonier@aol.comTrishBarbara, me, Gerard






Hi all.

Hope everyone is doing well.


absence


i was there in the moment

so much i was lost

in the magnetic molton center

of the middle of the night

in the darkest of forests

with no moon but the path

was still traversable 

by the faint wanderings

of the dead stars

millions of miles away


i was there when i needed to be

holding on to the tail

of the ether that once

told me it loved me


i was in the drivers seat

of the bus when all 

the passengers would not be still

as we slid and danced

across the danger to 

land in a pile of rock


so many of these moments

and i was there for them

so much so that everything else faded


and now

all these years on

that magnification somehow

feels like an absence


an absence of everything else outside that moment

just like the inverse flash on your eyes

when you quickly turn out the light


there for a branded moment

upon the eyes

but slowly fading





Hope you have a great meeting!

Dru


salmonier@aol.com


8:15 AM (23 minutes ago)




to me, gcoulombe92, lhharris96, marlounewkirk, marymary3, andersonrich8, rwbernold, tg49at, drudmartin, faylene747






Got a contagious cold, so will have to miss. Here's what I'd written:


Remainders

 

I am refigured by the missing-

hard scarred by their death,

wounded by their departure,

blotched by my disregard.

 

Grafted relatives and friends,

often greatly loved,

grow over burns

visible through new skin.

 

My changing self-appearance

Comes with aging realization

That I too will be numbered

Among the missing.




From Gerard:

From my father’s mouth


A poem about what I missed out on when I was absent

 

I was nearly always  absent when my father spoke

In mystical ways; he was an introvert who never 

Spoke unless someone pressed his “belly-button.” 

Father was  the toy child one held on one’s knee,

The one played like a boy-doll whose belly button,

of a sudden, pressed, was heard the noise of a click.

And,  out  came  the magical lilt of a remembrance.

 

But, all the while, from birth to death, my father 

Worked second shift as a warp tier in a textile mill

For nearly all of his life, excepting all of the parts

He had had on  City Hall’s  Stage as a young man. 

 

On those occasions, when in the unique company 

Of his three living brothers, father entertained 

The company with stories  from his  bygone days.

He gesticulated as an autocrat, and pronounced 

Things both magical and heretical, as a prophet.

He spoke in elevated tones and with impressive

Elan, until, concluding, he tumbled into his chair,

 

Perhaps drunk with the memories he had imbibed,

Or, more likely, exhausted from his performance.

(C)Coulombe.11-22-19

What did others miss out on? Was it good or bad?

 

Had I missed out on something 

That was neither good nor bad,

There had to have been a reason,

One that would make neither 

Those who went or stayed away

Any happier or sadder, today.

I know, to my personal dismay,

I never had any thought to allay.

 

Over time there have been  absences

That went unexplained or unexcused;

Much of the time, who gave a damn?

 

Others, no less, hadn’t given a care,

All the while, when I wasn’t there.

Well, maybe someone did miss me.

A woman I had met once over coffee.

She had invited me to a film soiree,

And I had said to her, “I will see.”

 

Once, I met a very pretty divorcee

Who invited me over for cake and tea .

The cake was chocolate, my favorite, 

Unfortunately, I was the one to grab it. 

And it flew up in the air, topsy-turvy.

As recompense for how she had tried

To get me to bed her, I stiffed my pride 

Into her, and quickly found a lock box

On her crotch, messaged, “out-foxed.”



The next assignment

Write a poem about the sound of snow.


The next meeting

Will be on Thursday, December 19, 2019.