September 6, 2018
Poets’ Roundtable
Welcome
I haven’t any word of pending absences, despite the alarming heat.
News and Jabber
I quoted from a Brain Pickin’s email and promised the link and here it is:
https://www.brainpickings.org/2016/04/15/louise-bourgeois-solitude/?mc_cid=7bb379bf57&mc_eid=6c170ebd12. It is always interesting to follow the links to other expressions on the theme of the post.
I commend to you this article from the Guardian:
It’s always interesting to get other poets’ takes on things. Also, these poets, in their answers cite poems worth looking up. Like this one by Major Jackson
Selling Out
Off from a double at McDonald’s,
no autumnal pinata, no dying leaves
crumbling to bits of colored paper
on the sidewalks only yesterday,
just each breath bursting to explosive fog
in a dead-end alley near Fifth,
where on my knees with my fingers
laced behind my head and a square
barrel 9MM prodding my left temple,
I thought of me in the afterlife.
Only moments before Chris Wilder and I
jogged down Girard to warmth
and the promise of two girls who winked
past an army of food reps, across the ice-bin
and pitched lanes of burgers and square
chips of fish, at us reigning over grills and vats,
lost in a barrage of beepers and timers.
Moments before, we stood in a check
cashing line for our first pay, evidence
of hours spent flipping baskets under
a heat-lamp, during break, with
a motley bunch of mothers on relief,
college students on bad credit, hard-hatted,
day-workers coated in white dust,
the minimum-waged poor from the many
fast-food joints lining Broad,
all of us anxious to enact the power
of our riches – me in the afterlife.
What did it matter that Chris and I
were still in our polyester uniforms
caked with day-old batter, setting out
for an evening of passion marks?
Or that an archipelago of grease-stains
smeared the length of our chests?
Or that we wore GAZELLES, matching
sheepskins and the ushanka although
miles from Leningrad. Truth is I lacked
direction, so that when Chris said,
Let’s first cop some blow, I trailed.
A loose spread of dealers guarded
corners. Runners returned from boarded,
three-floor walk-ups, told us to come back
later, troubled by my schoolboy jitters
and lack of hip. Then a kid, large for the chrome
HUFFY he pedaled, said he had the white stuff,
and came to an alley fronted by an iron
gate on a gentrified street edging
Northern Liberties. So dark, I could
barely make out his shape up front
digging pocket deep. I turned to tell Chris
how the night air glowed dark as soil,
how jangling keys made my neck itch,
how maybe this wasn’t so good an idea,
just when the cold opening of gun-barrel
steel poked my head and Chris’s eyes
widened like two water spills before
he bound away into a future of headphones
and release parties. Me? the afterlife?
Had I ever welcomed back the old neighborhood?
You wonder if a yearning persistent
as the seedcorn maggot tunnels through me?
All I know is that a single dog barked his own
vapor and an emptiness echoed through blasted
shells of rowhomes rising above,
and I could not forget the bare,
fingered-branches lacing a series
of powerlines in silhouette to the moon’s
hushed excursion across the battered
fields of our lives that endless night
of ricocheting fear and shame. No one
survives, no one unclasps his few strands
of gold chains or hums AMAZING GRACE
or pours all his measly bills and coins
into the trembling, free hand of his brother
and survives. No one is forced face down
and waits forty minutes to rise and begin
again his march past the ice-crusted dirt,
without friendship or love, who barely knows
why the cry of the earth sets him in motion,
running even from the season’s string of lights
flashing its pathetic shot at cheer — to arrive
here where the page is blank, an afterlife.
And this one;
A Cedary Fragrance
Even now,
decades after,
I wash my face with cold water –
Not for discipline,
nor memory,
nor the icy, awakening slap,
but to practice
choosing
to make the unwanted wanted.
by Jane Hirshfield, from Given Sugar, Given Salt, 2001
Even now,
decades after,
I wash my face with cold water –
Not for discipline,
nor memory,
nor the icy, awakening slap,
but to practice
choosing
to make the unwanted wanted.
by Jane Hirshfield, from Given Sugar, Given Salt, 2001
The Current Assignment
Who did it? Any comments on the ease/difficulty of the assignment? I tried making prose poems of poems I had already written. It didn’t work very well. I did manage a couple of decent things. I learned that the language still makes the difference, that the prose poem for all its prosiness still needs the elevated language we associate with poetry.
The Next Assignment
Any suggestions for the next assignment? I was thinking of a store poem, written as if you were a store. Here is a quotation from the online article I took the idea from:
The Assignment: Create the store of your life. What does this mean? Consider this! If your life and your personality could be represented by a store, what would it look like? What would you sell in your store? Who would be your customers? Where would your store be located, and what would it be called? What would the inside and outside of your store look like? What would you do in your store? Use the "store" as a metaphor for your character and personality.
And here is the link to the article: https://www.bespokeclassroom.com/blog/2017/7/23/beginning-the-year-with-creative-writing
The Next Meeting
The next meeting will be on September 20, 2018. Bring a friend.
Other Jabber