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This from the South China Morning Post: http://www.scmp.com/culture/books/article/2128480/ts-eliot-prize-goes-vietnam-born-us-poet-debut-collection-night-sky.
TS Eliot prize goes to Vietnam-born US poet for debut collection Night Sky With Exit Wounds
Two years after Hong Kong-born Sarah Howe became first poet to win the prize with debut collection, Ocean Vuong repeats the feat; at a London ceremony, the chairman of judges hails ‘the definitive arrival of a significant voice’
7 Jan 2018
After becoming the first literate person in his family and a prize-winning poet festooned with awards, Vietnam-born Ocean Vuong has now won perhaps his most prestigious accolade yet for his debut collection: the TS Eliot prize.
Reflecting on the aftermath of war over three generations, the collection, Night Sky With Exit Wounds, has already landed 29-year-old Vuong the Forward prize for best first collection, as well as the Whiting and the Thom Gunn awards.
I’m always trying to look for words inside words. It’s so beautiful to me that the word laughter is inside slaughter
The book has also been critically acclaimed, with Observer critic Kate Kellaway describing it as “a conduit for a life in which violence and delicacy collide”, and The New York Times’ Michiko Kakutani praising Vuong’s “tensile precision reminiscent of Emily Dickinson’s work, combined with a Gerard Manley Hopkins-like appreciation for the sound and rhythms of words”.
Vuong is only the second debutant poet to win the TS Eliot prize, two years after Hong Kong-born Sarah Howe became the first, winning for Loop of Jade in 2016.
Ocean Vuong reads from Night Sky With Exit Wounds
Before announcing Vuong as the winner at a ceremony at the Wallace Collection in London on Monday, chair of judges Bill Herbert called Night Sky With Exit Wounds “a compellingly assured debut, the definitive arrival of a significant voice”.
Vuong was the only non-white poet in the running for the prize.
“There is an incredible power in the story of this collection,” said Herbert. “There is a mystery at the heart of the book about generational karma, this migrant figure coming to terms with his relationship with his past, his relationship with his father and his relationship with his sexuality. All of that is borne out in some quite extraordinary imagery. The view of the world from this book is quite stunning.”
Hong Kong-born poet’s TS Eliot prize win ‘will change British poetry’
The cover of Vuong’s Night Sky With Exit Wounds.
Vuong was selected as the winner by judges Herbert, James Lasdun and Helen Mort from a 10-strong shortlist, which was initially criticised by some for its lack of diversity. Vuong was the only non-white poet listed, in a year when several poets of colour had been nominated for and won other big poetry prizes.
Born in Ho Chi Minh City, Vuong spent a year in a refugee camp as a baby and migrated to America when he was two years old, where he was raised by his mother, grandmother and aunt. Two aspects of Vuong’s life – his sexuality and the absence of his father – recur in his work, with several poems evoking Greek myth to explore the roles of fathers and sons.
“Western mythology is so charged with the father,” he told The Guardian in 2017. “Personally, I’m always asking who’s my father. Like Homer, I felt I’d better make it up.”
Hong Kong-born Sarah Howe, winner of the TS Eliot prize two years ago. Photo: Dickson Lee
Vuong, who now lives in the US state of Massachusetts and works as an assistant professor in the Master of Fine Arts programme for poets and writers at the University of Massachusetts, Amherst, only gained a taste for poetry in his 20s. He initially put together Night Sky With Exit Wounds for a competition that promised personal rejection to all entrants.
“I said, ‘Oh my, a personal rejection. Maybe that’ll give me some tips and push me back out there with a better idea,’” Vuong has recalled – but he received a publishing deal instead.
Hong Kong writers have much to say – and not just about democracy and politics
After winning the Forward prize, Vuong told The Guardian that he suspected dyslexia runs in his family, but felt it had positively affected his writing. “I think perhaps the disability helped me a bit, because I write very slowly and see words as objects. I’m always trying to look for words inside words. It’s so beautiful to me that the word laughter is inside slaughter.”
To mark the 25th anniversary of the prize, Vuong received £25,000 (US$34,500) – up from £20,000 last year – and will feature on a special UK postmark issued by Royal Mail.
Vuong joins a prestigious list of previous winners, including Don Paterson, Ted Hughes, Sharon Olds and Carol Ann Duffy, and will also be the first poet inducted into the new TS Eliot prize winners’ archive, which has been established to preserve the voices of winning poets online for posterity.
The prize was founded by the Poetry Book Society in 1993 and is now run by the TS Eliot Foundation.
Eurydice
By Ocean Vuong
It’s more like the sound
a doe makes
when the arrowhead
replaces the day
with an answer to the rib’s
hollowed hum. We saw it coming
but kept walking through the hole
in the garden. Because the leaves
were bright green & the fire
only a pink brushstroke
in the distance. It’s not
about the light—but how dark
it makes you depending
on where you stand.
Depending on where you stand
his name can appear like moonlight
shredded in a dead dog’s fur.
His name changed when touched
by gravity. Gravity breaking
our kneecaps just to show us
the sky. We kept saying Yes—
even with all those birds.
Who would believe us
now? My voice cracking
like bones inside the radio.
Silly me. I thought love was real
& the body imaginary.
But here we are—standing
in the cold field, him calling
for the girl. The girl
beside him. Frosted grass
snapping beneath her hooves.
Jenny Joseph: 'I shall wear purple' poet dies
16 January 2018
The sun has burst the sky
Because I love you
And the river its banks.
The sea laps the great rocks
Because I love you
And takes no heed of the moon dragging it away
And saying coldly 'Constancy is not for you'.
The blackbird fills the air
Because I love you
With spring and lawns and shadows falling on lawns.
The people walk in the street and laugh
I love you
And far down the river ships sound their hooters
Crazy with joy because I love you.
Jenny Joseph
The sun has burst the sky
Because I love you
And the river its banks.
The sea laps the great rocks
Because I love you
And takes no heed of the moon dragging it away
And saying coldly 'Constancy is not for you'.
The blackbird fills the air
Because I love you
With spring and lawns and shadows falling on lawns.
The people walk in the street and laugh
I love you
And far down the river ships sound their hooters
Crazy with joy because I love you.
Jenny Joseph
Here is the link to the article about her:
"When I am an old woman I shall wear purple
With a red hat which doesn’t go, and doesn’t suit me.
And I shall spend my pension on brandy and summer gloves
And satin sandals, and say we’ve no money for butter.
I shall sit down on the pavement when I’m tired
And gobble up samples in shops and press alarm bells
And run my stick along the public railings
And make up for the sobriety of my youth.
I shall go out in my slippers in the rain
And pick flowers in other people’s gardens
And learn to spit.
You can wear terrible shirts and grow more fat
And eat three pounds of sausages at a go
Or only bread and pickle for a week
And hoard pens and pencils and beermats and things in boxes.
But now we must have clothes that keep us dry
And pay our rent and not swear in the street
And set a good example for the children.
We must have friends to dinner and read the papers.
But maybe I ought to practice a little now?
So people who know me are not too shocked and surprised
When suddenly I am old, and start to wear purple."
Jenny Joseph, whose poem Warning was twice voted Britain's favourite poem, has died at the age of 85.
It is perhaps best known for its opening lines: "When I am an old lady I shall wear purple / With a red hat that doesn't go, and doesn't suit me."
Despite it being about old age, Joseph was in her 20s when she wrote it.
She wrote several poetry and prose collections, the most recent being published in 2009. Joseph died earlier this month after a short illness.
'One of best-loved poets'
Born in Birmingham, Joseph studied at the University of Oxford and went on to work as a newspaper reporter, pub landlady and lecturer.
Her agents described her as "one of Britain's best-loved poets".
Warning was voted Britain's favourite modern poem in 2006 - having previously been named the nation's favourite post-war poem 10 years previously in a BBC poll.
It went on to inspire the launch of the Red Hat Society - a women's group whose members wear purple, accessorised with a red hat.
However, the success of the poem is said to have annoyed Joseph, according to her publishers Bloodaxe Books.
"At the same time, she was delighted that it had been translated into numerous languages and was known throughout the world," they said. "What she disliked most was that this early poem written in her 20s overshadowed the rest of her work, which was largely concerned with the duality of existence...
"She viewed her poems as attempts to present 'how things work' at the core, at the edge."
'New ways of telling stories'
Joseph was made a Fellow of the Royal Society of Literature in 1999 and won the James Tait Black Prize for fiction for her work of prose and verse Persephone. She had previously won the Cholmondeley Award for her second poetry collection, Rose in the Afternoon.
She also had work published with Enitharmon Press. Its director Stephen Stuart-Smith, who worked with her on 2009's Nothing Like Love, described that last collection as "exploring a wide range of literary forms, new ways of telling stories, and demonstrating her skill in introducing cadences and everyday speech into the lyrical movement of her verse.
"As a person and as a poet she was warm and witty, as a friend loyal and supportive, as a performer entertaining as well as unpredictable."
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The Current Assignment
3/5/3/3/7/5 is a total of 26 syllables, shorter than a tweet. I started by lifting lines of the right length from another couple of poems of mine. This didn't work but did prompt me to start experimenting with the words I had chosen. The result wasn't bad.
The Next Assignment
The next assignment is to write an anti-Valentine's Day poem. Make it serious, or not. Any form, any topic as long as it connects in some way to Valentine's Day. Here is a link to the wikipedia entry for Valentine's Day: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Valentine%27s_Day.
The Next Meeting
The next meeting will be on February 1, 2018.
Other Jabber
The South African Poet Laureate Keorapetse Kgositsile died recently. He is a pot worth checking on. Here is one of his poems.
CASSANDRA WILSON WILL SING
- Poem by Keorapetse Kgositsile
Let me sense the chaos
I will respond
with a song
why else
was I
born
says Jimi of the purple haze
through Kalamu ya Salaam
Now look, at those eyes
look at her arms
follow her little finger
I wonder what
Jean Toomer who could see
the Georgia Pike growing
out of a goat path
in Africa
would say about
Cassandra Wilson tonight
Perhaps Cassandra
does not even sing.
Here of course a voice there is
possessed by music like the rest of her
her whole body is song
her whole body has sensed the chaos
I say look at those eyes
look at her arms
follow her little finger
and understand perhaps why
you were born with ears
Keorapetse Kgositsile
And here is a link to Cassandra Wilson singing "Fragile": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vTsOyV0k4QU
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ReplyDeleteIn Brief
ReplyDeleteRoses are dead
by the time they are given
Cut long or short
unawares and unshriven
Even the bud that is still
yet to bloom
Already dead
in some vase
on some table
in some room
I was eager to post my notes, poems I wrote while waiting for news of the current assignment. G
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1/19/18
What’s great about the day
What’s great about the day
Is the sound the earth makes
When in spring crocuses
Break out of the earth, early
On a sunny day when the sun
Tickles the earth to let its energy
Show us what is possible in us all.
Use the gimlet to bore holes
Where none are made by borer
Insects in the peaks of the house
Next door, the one with moss growing
On its rooftops and the chipping paint.
I love the property’s back lot from which
The deer, alert to the dangers, risk placing
A hoof ahead of the other, while sniffing the air
As their eyes, bulging out of their heads, twist
In their orbs to catch the interlopers in their watch
And in a twist of muscles and a wrench of the neck
They leap away in arching bounds to the woods.
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Breathtaking
DeleteAnother take:
DeleteA doe and two young
Out of nowhere
a doe and two young ones
transfixed on the edge
of deepening night;
so motionless
the dog did not see.
I was tempted to walk toward but
then the dog did see
and wanted the chase,
his guardian duty.
I dragged him up
to the second floor landing.
By then the deer were gone,
returned to nowhere
in the deepening darkness,
transfixed forever
in my eye,
the dog and I forever transfixed in theirs,
the five of us going home
in the infinite orbit
of God’s eternal eye.
Unpublished work Copyright 2017 Emerson Gilmore
Yes!
DeleteI wrote something every day. I have time to do that, although I must not pass on exercise, and I do, all too often. Although, I'm most happy when I write something, even a letter to the editor. The latter is a daily exercise.
ReplyDeleteShowmanship
He was a brave football player
His 1950 roadster, cheerleader filled,
On the way to the Saturday afternoon
Thornton Academy football field.
Years later, riding a rig from Canada
His brother-in-law jackknifed round a bend
And, as I read about it in the Bangor papers
I thought Buddy was dead for sure.
But, no, it was his brother-in-law,
The body, bloodied, all-in all, a twisted mess.
Next time Buddy showed up in the news,
I thought, this time, he was surely dead.
And so he was, as the story told, drowned
When he swamped his new speedboat
With two, high school aged, friends aboard.
He left his wife and children behind,
A junior grown-up, moneyed to his eyebrows--
All three drowned, preservers in their wraps.
Two widows, sisters, in their pale.
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Magic with a camera
ReplyDeleteConfiguring a photo through the lens
Of a camera held in the hand ahead
Of the runner, steady, on the target
Photo before the image escapes --
Then to capture it, what it was --
But a car about to strike the barrier
Off a worksite whereto, and then, plunge
Over the edge, in the magic of a fall
Into a fast, swirling, boulder strewn
Water to shatter like a nothing into pieces,
The remnants of which were collected
As the parts, they were to reassemble.
Young as a cow who needs calving
Finding the end in disarrangement.
G. Needing to write
Poisson Rouge /fourteen/ brake
It was the blow and the impact
To the head, in spite of the helmet,
That scrambled his brain and damaged
His ability to behave normally in subsequent
Games, necessitating head crushing blows. [1]
He knew what was coming and rushed
Through the hole he saw for the tackle,
Head lowered, his eyes to the ground,
His nose pushing snot out like a bull. [2]
What he saw was the green turf
And the cleat holes of his target feet
Before his head slammed into the matting
For the groin, as his hands clasped muscle. [3]
He ordered six scrambled eggs for breakfast &
Six margarine buttered, brown bread toast &
Then walked to a quarry with old-boy friends.
They judiciously shot a few to collect on a bet
For which he was arrested, not over the bet, of course,
But for the shooting that took place, killing two,
Or more. Who knows? I guess reporters do who
Report the story in the local press, revealing, later,
To have been a problem of a short-circuit in the brain.
[4]
Poisson Rouge /fourteen/ brake
It was the blow and the impact
To the head, in spite of the helmet,
That scrambled his brain and damaged
His ability to behave normally in subsequent
Games, necessitating head crushing blows. [1]
He knew what was coming and rushed
Through the hole he saw for the tackle,
Head lowered, his eyes to the ground,
His nose pushing snot out like a bull. [2]
What he saw was the green turf
And the cleat holes of his target feet
Before his head slammed into the matting
For the groin, as his hands clasped muscle. [3]
He ordered six scrambled eggs for breakfast &
Six margarine buttered, brown bread toast &
Then walked to a quarry with old-boy friends.
They judiciously shot a few to collect on a bet
For which he was arrested, not over the bet, of course,
But for the shooting that took place, killing two,
Or more. Who knows? I guess reporters do who
Report the story in the local press, revealing, later,
To have been a problem of a short-circuit in the brain.
[4]
Also, I have been reading and reading the poem discussed in the last session, and I was determined to take more than several passes at reading it to learn its mystery. I have toyed with the idea that it is probably a prose piece written by the author that he re-arranged as a poem, lifted a phrase here and there and moved it, innocuously, to fit elsewhere, elevating tone to create mystery. G
ReplyDeleteAlso, I have been reading and reading the poem discussed in the last session, and I was determined to take more than several passes at reading it to learn its mystery. I have toyed with the idea that it is probably a prose piece written by the author that he re-arranged as a poem, lifted a phrase here and there and moved it, innocuously, to fit elsewhere, elevating tone to create mystery. G
ReplyDeleteI'm still working on Eurydice, a reformatting. G
ReplyDeleteI'm still working on Eurydice, a reformatting. G
ReplyDeleteI'm still working on "Eurydice, a reformatting. G
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