Friday, December 21, 2018

December 20, 2018

Poets’ Roundtable


Welcome


Richard will not be here. He hopes to bring his wife home on Sunday and to make our next meeting, January 3, 2018.


News and Jabber


This links to an article about plagiarism on Twitter. It serves as a reminder to us to attribute carefully and not to steal. Another "Vulture" article is here: https://www.vulture.com/2018/12/poetry-twitter-debates-whether-after-poems-are-plagiarism.html. It takes on another source of plagiarism or something close thereto.



Every year I urge you to go to youtube.com and listen to Dylan Thomas reading  "Child's Christmas in Wales." A great voice and a lovely reminisence. Here is he link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hv4-sgFw3Go. Worth twenty minutes at this time of year. A moment's peace. 

A poem called “Kindness” was the most popular work on top poetry website poets.org in 2018.

The poem, by 66-year-old Naomi Shihab Nye, was published in 1995. Nye was born in St. Louis to a Palestinian father and an American mother.

More than 250,000 people clicked on the poem this year, the Academy of American Poets announced Wednesday, according to The Associated Press.



Nye said in a statement that she wrote the poem after being robbed in Colombia, according to the AP.

“It is only kindness that makes sense anymore, only kindness that ties your shoes,” the poem reads.

The Current Assignment


I had a time with this. Wrote a lot. 

The Next Assignment

Suggestions?

The Next Meeting


The next meeting will be on January 3, 2018.

Other Jabber





Friday, December 7, 2018

Decemer 6, 2018

https://www.mcsweeneys.net/articles/the-beautiful-poetry-of-donald-trump

Also insert copy of the ars poetic from Baron Wormser "Anecdotes" from Subject Matter


Poets’ Roundtable


Welcome


News and Jabber


Regarding the prose poem, check  out this excellent artricle from The Guardian:

Ars Poetica certainly took me many ways. I brought two and don't know which to foist upon you.

The Current Assignment

The Next Assignment

The next assignment is to write a Christmas poem but it is to be a letter FROM Santa to anyone, anything, whate or whom ever. 

The Next Meeting


The next meeting is on December 20, 2018, 12:30 PM

Other Jabber

And now to the poetry of Donald Trump, which comes from https://www.mcsweeneys.net/articles/the-beautiful-poetry-of-donald-trump which features Rob Sears’ “strictly unauthorized” collection, The Beautiful Poetry of Donald Trump.

I am the least racist person there is1

I’ve always had a great relationship with the blacks2
I remained strong for Tiger Woods during his difficult period3
Oprah, I love Oprah. Oprah would always be my first choice4
Kanye West – I love him5
I think Eminem is fantastic, and most people think I wouldn’t like Eminem6
And did you know my name is in more black songs than any other name in hip-hop?7
You are the racist, not I8
- - -
1. Fox & Friends, Fox News, 9 May 2011
2. Interview on Talk1300 AM, 14 April 2011
3. Tweet referencing Tiger Woods’ marital infidelity and later victory at Trump National Doral, 20 March 2013
4. In answer to a question about possible VP picks in an interview with Larry King, 7 October 1999
5. Press conference, 3 September 2015
6. Playboy interview, 1 October 2004
7. Playboy interview, 1 October 2004
8. Annotation by Trump on article by Jonathan Capehart, which he sent to the journalist – tweeted by Capehart, July 8, 2015

Everybody loves me1

Tom Brady loves me2
The people of New York, they love me3
Upstate New York, I’m like the most popular person that’s ever lived4
The bikers love me5
You know who loves me? The Tea Party, the evangelicals6
My children could not love me more if I spent fifteen times more time with them7
The vets love me8
The African Americans love me9
The Asians love me10
Many Hispanics who love me11
Most conservatives love me12
Society loves me13
You are going to love me14
Or I will spill the beans on your wife!15
- - -
1. Interview with Anderson Cooper, CNN, 8 July 2015
2. Interview with Bob Woodward and Robert Costas, 8 April 2016
3. Address to supporters in Lawrenceville, New Jersey, CSPAN, 20 May 2016
4. Interview with CNN, 21 February 2016 
5. Washington This WeekCSPAN, 3 April 2016 
6. CNN Tonight with Don LemonCNN, 30 September 2015 
7. New York Magazine, 13 December 2004 
8. Morning JoeMSNBC, 24 July 2015 
9. Media Buzz, Fox News, 25 January 2016 
10. First LookMSNBC, 4 September 2015
11. America This MorningABC, 9 October 2015 
12. Meet the PressNBC, 24 January 2016
13. Anderson Cooper 360 GOP Town Hall, CNN, 19 February 2016
14. Remarks at Iowa State Fair on how he believed people would respond to his immigration policies, 15 August 2015
15. Tweet threatening Ted Cruz, 22 March 2016




Friday, November 16, 2018

November 15, 2018

https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/indications-excerpt

For item about ars poetica assignment

Poets’ Roundtable


Welcome

Great to be here.

News and Jabber



The above link will take you to an NPR interview with Robert Pinsky and Brian Turner, both poets, Turner a veteran. Robert Pinsky has been around a long time and is worth looking up. Check out the 22 minute segment.


This link will take you to the Wikipedia page of Ursula Le Guin. She worked in a lot of fantasy and fiction but at the end of her life turned out a book of poems titled So Far So Good. Here are three of her poems from that book. I especially like the opening lines of the second. 

Three New Poems by Ursula Le Guin
From her posthumous book, So Far So Good, the literary icon on time, aging, and memory
Welcome to Recommended Reading’s new Monday Commuter, our home for poetry, flash, graphic, and experimental narrative.


Flying Fox (Fruit Bat), James Reed
Issue №32
Bats
i
When I used to see bats flying
in the California twilight
their intricate zigzag voices
went flickering with them
but they fell silent with the years
and without that tiny sonar static
to see them flicker
in and out of being
is a kind of blindness

ii
In the twilight in my dream
a little bat was flying
and awakening I wondered
if the bat that I remembered
flying in the twilight
of the dream of California
was in California or the dream.

Ancestry
I am such a long way from my ancestors now
in my extreme old age that I feel more one of them
than their descendant. Time comes round
in a bodily way I do not understand. Age undoes itself
and plays the Ouroboros. I the only daughter
have always been one of the tiny grandmothers,
laughing at everything, uncomprehending,
incomprehensible.

Looking Back
Remember me before I was a heap of salt,
the laughing child who seldom did
as she was told or came when she was called,
the merry girl who became Lot’s bride,
the happy woman who loved her wicked city.
Do not remember me with pity.
I saw you plodding on ahead
into the desert of your pitiless faith.
Those springs are dry, that earth is dead.
I looked back, not forward, into death.
Forgiving rains dissolve me, and I come
still disobedient, still happy, home.


About the Author
Ursula Kroeber Le Guin (1929–2018) was a celebrated and beloved author of 21 novels, 11 volumes of short stories, four collections of essays, 12 children’s books, six volumes of poetry and four of translation. The breadth and imagination of her work earned her six Nebulas, seven Hugos, and SFWA’s Grand Master, along with the PEN/Malamud and many other awards. In 2014 she was awarded the National Book Foundation Medal for Distinguished Contribution to American Letters, and in 2016 joined the short list of authors to be published in their lifetimes by the Library of America.

The Current Assignment

Wh did it? Any comments regarding the process?

The Next Assignment


The above link will take you to a list of  poems reagarding ars poetica, which means "the art of poetry." The poems vary in title and style. Here is a segment from Walt Whitman:

The Indications [excerpt]
Walt Whitman, 1819 - 1892
 The words of the true poems give you more than poems,   
They give you to form for yourself, poems, religions, politics, war, peace, behavior, histories, essays, romances, and everything else,   
They balance ranks, colors, races, creeds, and the sexes,
They do not seek beauty—they are sought,   
Forever touching them, or close upon them, follows beauty, longing, fain, love-sick.   
   
They prepare for death—yet are they not the finish, but rather the outset,   
They bring none to his or her terminus, or to be content and full;   
Whom they take, they take into space, to behold the birth of stars, to learn one of the meanings,
To launch off with absolute faith—to sweep through the ceaseless rings, and never be quiet again.

So the assignment is to write your own ars poetica.


The Next Meeting

The next meeting will be on Thursday, December 6, 2018.

Other Jabber





Thursday, November 1, 2018

November 1, 2018

Poets’ Roundtable


Welcome

As we read and speak today, let us remember to listen attentively. We, in our enthusiasm, at times talk over one another and this causes us to lose time and insight. It also does violence to the poem which is meant to be the center of our focus.  



News and Jabber

This link will take you to a New Yorker article about Donald Hall's writing life after age 80. The many links will take you to further samples, info, etc. about that remarkable period in Hall's life.

One of his later poems, linked to in the article is nine stanzas of nine lines of nine syllables.  Rather than that, let's just write poems of any length with nine-syllapble lines and nine-line stanzas of any number. Please make it more than one stanza long.

Additionally, here is a link to another New Yorker article, this one about Tony Hoagland, whose death I noted recently noted in an email. https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2018/11/05/peaceful-transition

The Current Assignment

I found it manifesting itself in various ways and wrote three contenders for the assignment. I'll present the one I think best exemplifies transfiguring language.

The Next Assignment


Write a  poem of at least two nine-line, nine-syllable stanzas.

The Next Meeting


The next meeting will be on Thursday, November 15, 2018.

Other Jabber

I am re-reading The Bow and the Lyre by Octavio Paz. It is one of my bibles. When we looked at prose poems a couple of months ago I spoke about poetic language as an outstanding feature of the prose poems. Poetic language has more to do with the making of the poem than almost any other feature. Paz, in this book, spends a lot of time speaking of the language poets use. I like his assertion that poetic language that is transfigured. If the language is transfigured, then we find that ideas rhyme. It is not unlike magic. So, look into your own poems to find where language is transfigured. If it is not something more than ordinary language, try to make it so. Language moves from representing something to phrasing that declares something unnameable. Read from pages 28 and 29.

If time permits, discuss the encounter with Elizabeth Bishop.


Between Going And Coming - Poem by Octavio Paz

Between going and staying
the day wavers,
in love with its own transparency.
The circular afternoon is now a bay
where the world in stillness rocks.

All is visible and all elusive,
all is near and can’t be touched.

Paper, book, pencil, glass,
rest in the shade of their names.

Time throbbing in my temples repeats
the same unchanging syllable of blood.

The light turns the indifferent wall
into a ghostly theater of reflections.

I find myself in the middle of an eye,
watching myself in its blank stare.

The moment scatters. Motionless,
I stay and go: I am a pause. 

Saturday, October 20, 2018

October 18, 2018

Poets’ Roundtable


Welcome

Rich Anderson will not be here today. I have no other word on absentees. Today is National Chocolate Cupcake Day and National No Beard Day. Celebrate accordingly.



News and Jabber

We're going to do a "blackout exercise" called such because it usually asks you to black out the words you are not going to use. Today we'll just circle the words that will go into our poems. So, take the  page I gave you and circle (or crossout) the words to use or not use in the  poem that you are going to make from the words in the article.


WHO WAS THE FIRST RAPPER? RUSSIA CLAIMS SOVIET POET INVENTED RAP MUSIC

BY TOM O'CONNOR ON 10/16/18 AT 1:56 PM
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Russia's minister of culture has claimed that one of his country's most famous poets invented rap music and that the genre may become a Russian form of art in the future.
Vladimir Mayakovsky was an early 20th-century artist who became famous for his futurist style, satirical attacks on the bourgeoisie and eager support for the Bolshevik Revolution that swept his country in 1917. He grew critical of communist rule under Joseph Stalin and later took his own life in 1930 at the young age of 36, but his deeply influential works have lived on in Russian society.
Addressing the Valdai Discussion Club on Tuesday, Russian Culture Minister Vladimir Medinsky said that he grew frustrated with his son's fascination with rap and, after studying it himself, proclaimed that "Mayakovsky was the first rapper," according to the Interfax news agency.
Medinsky said that because "Russian culture is exceptionally open, tolerant, responsive, receptive to everything foreign," future generations may "soon be saying that rap is a Russian form of art. It may have originated in America, but it developed further here."
After explaining his origin of rap theory to his son, Medinsky said his son went to school and "recounted everything to the class, then they read Mayakovsky and agreed."
Mayakovsky's repertoire crossed not only genres but also platforms. A renowned poet, artist, playwright and actor, his work was embraced by the Soviet Union in spite of his disillusionment under Stalin and long after his suicide. In a 1993 Newsweek article, Mayakovsky's works were described as "a precursor to performance art, punk and even rap" and it was said that Stalin outlawed failing to appreciate the artist.
As far as rap and hip hop goes, most trace the music form's roots back to the Bronx, New York City in the early 1970s and its commercial popularity the following decade to the 1979 hit "Rapper's Delight" by the Sugarhill Gang. A 1999 publication entitled Ego Trip's Book of Rap Lists, gave DJ Kool Herc the title of first hip hop DJ, with his first party taking place at the now-famous 1520 Sedgwick Avenue apartment building in the Morris Heights neighborhood of the Bronx in 1973.
Starting out as a largely underground movement pioneered by the African-American community, rap and its sister genres hip-hop and R&B officially became the most popular music forms of music in the United States last year, according to a Nielsen Music report.
Medinsky is not the first to propose an alternative birthplace for rap, however. University of New Mexico professor Ferenc Szasz has argued that the true inventors of the award-winning genre were the medieval Scots practicing the art of "flyting," a poetic exchange of insults. The academic claimed the African-American community was first exposed to this ritual by Scottish slave owners in the United States, as he recounted to The Telegraph in 2008.

To His Beloved Self, The Author Dedicates These Lines

Some words.
Heavy as a blow.
'Render unto Caesar what is Caesar's- to God what is God's.'
And one
such as I,
where shall I squeeze in?
Where is my den?

If only I were
small
as the great Pacific -
I'd stand up on the waves' tiptoes
and caress the moon with my tides.
Where am I to find a beloved
equal to myself?
Such a woman has no place in the tiny heavens!

If only I were poor!
As a billionaire!
What's money to the soul?
There's an insatiable thief in mine.
All the gold in California couldn't feed
the unbridled horde of my desires.

If I could only be as tongue-tied
as Dante
or Petrarch!
Turn my soul's fire on one woman!
Make it smolder out in verse!
My words
and my love-
are a triumphal arch:
the beloveds of all ages
would pass through it gloriously,
without a trace.

If only I were
quiet
as thunder-
I would whimper
and, trembling, embrace earth's decrepit cloister.
If I outroar in an enormous voice
with all the power of thunder-
comets will wring their burning hands,
and fling themselves down in despair.

I would crack open nights with my eye's ray,
if only I were
dim as the sun!
I so need
to slake with my shining
the sunken bosom of the earth!

I will pass by,
dragging my giant-love.
In what
delirious
feverish night,
by what Goliaths was I conceived-
so big
and so useless? 

The Current Assignment

I found this interesting in that the lies I could reveal weren't very interesting. Also, as I wrote, I discovered that lies, the good ones, came in layers if not bunches. Apparently lying is not only easy but can get exceedingly complex. As Veronica Roth says, "Lies require commitment."    At any rate, I wrote a lot about truth and lies and learned the difficulty of correcting a lie so that it reveals the right truth.



Dru's poem:

Hi all. 
Hope everyone is doing well. 
Here is my entry for the assignment...
it’ll be ok
i knew it wasn’t right
but it was all i had

sitting by his side
we all knew it wouldn’t be ok
but the mask it what we’re used to

its a new normal on the other side
hypnotized, we do anything we can to avoid a world without
but its inevitable

maybe it’ll be ok
but it’ll never be the same

The Next Assignment


Write a poem re what your body would tell you if it could talk. 

The Next Meeting

The next meeting will be on Thursday, November 1, 2018

Other Jabber


For the blackout exercise, I used the following excerpt


An excerpt from
Young Men and Fire
by Norman Maclean
   
"A magnificent drama of writing, a tragedy that pays tribute to the dead and offers rescue to the living. . . . Norman Maclean's search for the truth, which becomes an exploration of his own mortality, is more compelling even than his journey into the heart of the fire. His description of the conflagration terrifies, but it is his battle with words, his effort to turn the story of the 13 men into tragedy that makes this book a classic."—from New York Times Book Review Editor's Choice, Best Books of 1992

"An astonishing book. In compelling language, both homely and elegant, Young Men and Fire miraculously combines a fascinating primer on fires and firefighting, a powerful, breathtakingly real reconstruction of a tragedy, and a meditation on writing, grief and human character.... Maclean's last book will stir your heart and haunt your memory."—Timothy Foote, USA Today

"Young Men and Fire is a somber and poetic retelling of a tragic event. It is the pinnacle of smokejumping literature and a classic work of 20th-century nonfiction."—John Holkeboer, The Wall Street Journal

"Beautiful.... A dark American idyll of which the language can be proud."—Robert M. Adams, The New York Review of Books

Copyright

 
Then Dodge saw it. Rumsey and Sallee didn't, and probably none of the rest of the crew did either. Dodge was thirty-three and foreman and was supposed to see; he was in front where he could see. Besides, he hadn't liked what he had seen when he looked down the canyon after he and Harrison had returned to the landing area to get something to eat, so his seeing powers were doubly on the alert. Rumsey and Sallee were young and they were crew and were carrying tools and rubbernecking at the fire across the gulch. Dodge takes only a few words to say what the "it" was he saw next: "We continued down the canyon for approximately five minutes before I could see that the fire had crossed Mann Gulch and was coming up the ridge toward us."

Neither Rumsey nor Sallee could see the fire that was now on their side of the gulch, but both could see smoke coming toward them over a hogback directly in front. As for the main fire across the gulch, it still looked about the same to them, "confined to the upper third of the slope."

At the Review, Dodge estimated they had a 150- to 200-yard head start on the fire coming at them on the north side of the gulch. He immediately reversed direction and started back up the canyon, angling toward the top of the ridge on a steep grade. When asked why he didn't go straight for the top there and then, he answered that the ground was too rocky and steep and the fire was coming too fast to dare to go at right angles to it.

You may ask yourself how it was that of the crew only Rumsey and Sallee survived. If you had known ahead of time that only two would survive, you probably never would have picked these two—they were first-year jumpers, this was the first fire they had ever jumped on, Sallee was one year younger than the minimum age, and around the base they were known as roommates who had a pretty good time for themselves. They both became big operators in the world of the woods and prairies, and part of this story will be to find them and ask them why they think they alone survived, but even if ultimately your answer or theirs seems incomplete, this seems a good place to start asking the question. In their statements soon after the fire, both say that the moment Dodge reversed the route of the crew they became alarmed, for, even if they couldn't see the fire, Dodge's order was to run from one. They reacted in seconds or less. They had been traveling at the end of the line because they were carrying unsheathed saws. When the head of the line started its switchback, Rumsey and Sallee left their positions at the end of the line, put on extra speed, and headed straight uphill, connecting with the front of the line to drop into it right behind Dodge.

They were all traveling at top speed, all except Navon. He was stopping to take snapshots.



The world was getting faster, smaller, and louder, so much faster that for the first time there are random differences among the survivors about how far apart things were. Dodge says it wasn't until one thousand to fifteen hundred feet after the crew had changed directions that he gave the order for the heavy tools to be dropped. Sallee says it was only two hundred yards, and Rumsey can remember. Whether they had traveled five hundred yards or two hundred yards, the new fire coming up the gulch toward them was coming faster than they had been going. Sallee says, "By the time we dropped our packs and tools the fire was probably not much over a hundred yards behind us, and it seemed to me that it was getting ahead of us both above and below." If the fire was only a hundred yards behind now it had gained a lot of ground on them since they had reversed directions, and Rumsey says he could never remember going faster in his life than he had for the last five hundred yards.




Thursday, October 11, 2018

October 4, 2018

Poets’ Roundtable

October 4, 2018

Welcome

What day is today? National Poetry Day in England and Ireland. Here it is National Vodka Day, celebrated at least since 2009. (It is also National Taco Day and National Golf Lovers Day.)

We've heard that Ed will not be in today. 
I had an interesting time since our last meeting, the best part of which was in Cape Cod for eight days, ending Tuesday. That is why I have communicated so little running up to this meeting. One of the high points was my annual/semi-annual trip to Tims's Used Books in Provincetown. I gave up buying books several years ago when I realized my reading list is lengthier than my life is likely to be. Nonetheless, I was on the hunt of a cheap copy of DAnte's Inferno, which I found. Better than that was the discovery of Making Certain It Goes On, the collected poems of Richard Hugo. You'll remember him as the author of The Triggering Town, a book of essays on writing, one of my favorite guides. It turns out that Hugo was not only a wonderful poet but he knew lots of significant poets and dedicated many poems to them. He also studied under Theodor Roethke, among others. So, I bought both books and have been entranced since, using phrases from Hugo to begin riffs of my own.

Read "Graves" by Richard Hugo, p.355. The poem fits both the season and the theme of today's assignment.

Before vacationing, I wrote extensively about ruins of sorts, a process enhanced by my renewing contact with a childhood friend who is an accomplished amateur astronomer and who sent me a photograph he took of a collapsed star (read ruined) called, unpretentiously, M97. He and it show up in a few stanzas.

News and Jabber

National Poetry Day is a British campaign to promote poetry, including public performances. National Poetry Day was founded in 1994 by William Sieghart. It takes place annually in the UK and Ireland on a Thursday in late September/early October.


In a run-up to an article about National Poetry Day I found a recommendation of an anthology of American poets, a review of which I provide here:

The Poem Is You: 60 Contemporary American Poems and How to Read Them
Stephen Burt. Belknap, $27.95 (410p) ISBN 978-0-674-73787-7

Poet and critic Burt’s (Belmont) ambitious anthology of recent poems by American authors, from 1981 to 2015, creates a coherent body of work out of the vast landscape of recent American poetry. Burt’s 60 selections are eclectic, mingling instantly recognizable names (John Ashbery, Adrienne Rich) with newer talents (Lucia Perillo, Claudia Rankine.) His short reflections don’t offer close reading so much as thorough contextual grounding, lingering more on biography, traditions, influences, criticism, and social critique than on form, scansion, and imagery. Burt’s many ways of looking at a poem will inspire new students and accomplished poets, especially as many of his meditations circle the question of what poetry does, or should do: making readers pay attention, ask questions, and experience new things. Burt’s formidable breadth of knowledge about the practice of poetry, from Virgil up to 2015, allows him to make nimble connections among authors and establish an ars poetica for current American lyric poetry, an impressive feat given the diverse selection just within this book, in which “the recondite and the demotic, the accessible and the challenging, mingle.” (Sept.)

The Current Assignment


As indicated, I had quite a time with this assignment. Life conspires that way sometimes. I've been writing quite a lot for someone who usually writes quite a lot and have even found success writing while on vacation, something I used to fail at and urged others not to try. The poems I wrote range in length from eight lines to several pages and are all somewhat intertwined. It seems my ruins know no bounds.

The Next Assignment


Write a poem about the biggest lie you ever told.

The Next Meeting


The next meeting will be on October 18, 2018.

Other Jabber

Annually, I read Keats's "Ode to Autumn"


To Autumn 
BY JOHN KEATS

Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness, 
   Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun; 
Conspiring with him how to load and bless 
   With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eves run; 
To bend with apples the moss'd cottage-trees, 
   And fill all fruit with ripeness to the core; 
      To swell the gourd, and plump the hazel shells 
   With a sweet kernel; to set budding more, 
And still more, later flowers for the bees, 
Until they think warm days will never cease, 
      For summer has o'er-brimm'd their clammy cells. 

Who hath not seen thee oft amid thy store? 
   Sometimes whoever seeks abroad may find 
Thee sitting careless on a granary floor, 
   Thy hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind; 
Or on a half-reap'd furrow sound asleep, 
   Drows'd with the fume of poppies, while thy hook 
      Spares the next swath and all its twined flowers: 
And sometimes like a gleaner thou dost keep 
   Steady thy laden head across a brook; 
   Or by a cyder-press, with patient look, 
      Thou watchest the last oozings hours by hours. 

Where are the songs of spring? Ay, Where are they? 
   Think not of them, thou hast thy music too,— 
While barred clouds bloom the soft-dying day, 
   And touch the stubble-plains with rosy hue; 
Then in a wailful choir the small gnats mourn 
   Among the river sallows, borne aloft 
      Or sinking as the light wind lives or dies; 
And full-grown lambs loud bleat from hilly bourn; 
   Hedge-crickets sing; and now with treble soft 
   The red-breast whistles from a garden-croft; 
      And gathering swallows twitter in the skies.









Friday, September 21, 2018

September 20, 2018

Poets’ Roundtable



Welcome
Rich Anderson will not be here today.

News and Jabber

I opened with a quiz regarding lyrics ostensibly of a poem but in reality was a song written by Marianne Faithfull, Mick Jagger and Keith Richards. Here is a link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iCnx2kjk8T4. Turn it up and drift away….


The Current Assignment
Who did it? I told you in an email that I was having a great time of it. Here is Dru Martin’s offering:


The Next Assignment
The next assignment is to write a poem about something abandoned.
I take this from an article I read about ancient Middle-Eastern poetry.
The article discusses the poetry of ruins, losses as it existed in sixth-century and how it is being revived today in a variety of arts, but especially poetry. The introductory paragraph, inserted below, gives an idea of the kind of impetus I see behind the assignment. Still, the assignment is open to any interpretation you find appropriate. The two images below give an old and a new look at abandoned places, each prompting its own reflections.

By Paul Cooper
21 August 2018
“A bleak landscape stretches out in all directions, broken only by wind-hewed formations of sandstone. A lone traveller wanders this hostile, waterless place, looking for shelter. And then on the horizon, a line of ruined walls appears to him like an apparition. In the heat haze, they seem to hover above the ground. As he gets closer, memories of this place come back to him. Broken tents and pegs, abandoned fire pits, the signs of a camp long-since abandoned: this is the place where he once met the love of his life, now lost forever. As he wanders the ruins, he sees deer and goats grazing where he once walked with his beloved. He sees the plants of the desert bursting up through the tent where they once lay together. As the memories of this place rush back to him, the horizon flashes with thunder and the rain finally comes to the land.”

Standing Before the Ruins of Al-Birweh

Like birds, I tread lightly on the earth’s skin
so as not to wake the dead
I shut the door to my emotions to become my other
I don’t feel that I am a stone sighing
as it longs for a cloud
Thus I tread as if I am a tourist
and a correspondent for a foreign newspaper
Of this place I choose the wind
I choose absence to describe it
Absence sat, neutral, around me
The crow saw it
Halt, my two companions!
Let us experience this place our own way:
Here, a sky fell on a stone and bled it
so that anemones would bloom in the spring
(Where is my song now?)
Here, the gazelle broke the glass of my window
so that I would follow it
(So where is my song now?)
Here, the magical morning butterflies carried the path to my school
(So where is my song now?)
Here I saddled a horse to fly to my stars
(So where is my song now?)
I say to my two companions:
Stop so that I may weigh the place
and its emptiness with Jahili odes
full of horses and departure
For every rhyme we will pitch a tent
For every home to be stormed by the wind,
there is a rhyme
But I am the son of my first tale
My milk is warm in my mother’s breast
The bed is swung by two tiny birds
My father is building my tomorrow with his two hands
I didn’t grow up and so did not go to exile
The tourist says: Wait for the dove to finish its cooing!
I say: It knows me and I know it, but the letter has not arrived
The journalist interrupts my secret song:
Do you see that dairy factory behind that strong pine tree?
I say: No, I only see the gazelle at the window
He says: What about the modern roads on the rubble of houses?
I say: No, I don’t see them
I only see the garden under them
and I see the cobweb
He says: Dry your two tears with a handful of fresh grass
I say: That is my other crying over my past
The tourist says: The visit is over
I haven’t found anything to photograph except a ghost
I say: I see absence with all its instruments
I touch it and hear it. It lifts me high
I see the ends of the distant skies
Whenever I die I notice
I am born again and I return
from absence to absence

(Translated by Sinan Antoon, from Darwish`s posthumous collection, La Uridu Li-Hadhihi al-Qasidati an Tantahi (I Don`t Want This Poem to End) (Beirut: Riyad al-Rayyis, 2009).
* Al-Birweh is the village in which Darwish was born on March 13, 1941. It was occupied and depopulated in 1948 by Israeli forces. Its inhabitants became refugees, some in Lebanon, some internally displaced and designated present-absentees. In 1949, a Kibbutz was established. A year later a settlement was built on the lands of al-Birweh. )



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